Monday, November 7, 2016

October article by Rhadi

My Conference

The first conference in Rhadi’s new school. he wasn’t that nervous at first.They were talking then the teacher (Ms.Barnes) showed them something he did silly, and his parents laughed. he know’s it was with why. he does not know why, but he felt embarrassed.
So he and his mom got out the car and there were grey clouds, raining,and it getting darker by the minute.  So he guessed it was bound for somebody to feel weird?  So when they were going in the school he cracked a couple jokes.  But when they came in the class it was strictly seriousness.  So they talked about the grades and how he was doing socially.
But then she brought up something he did silly on work.  So of course his parents laughed.  And for some reason, he felt kind of embarrassed. He did’nt tell his parents, but they know now.  But he had to get with it, so he laughed to.  And then they talked about the rest,and then when they walked out.  Then his dad said, ”I’m so proud of you, for adjusting to a new school so quick” and he said ”thank you.”  And his mom said ”and thank you for being so quick to agree to have to change schools.” he said ”your welcome” and they walked out of  his first conference in his new school.


2 comments:

  1. Great piece I liked all of your details and you also had great punctuation.

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