Thanksgiving Day
Rhadi’s thanksgiving was was very fun but at the end it was scary.
So he was coming from home a big fever.It had calmed down.So he could have gone to school but the 2 day weekend (because of thanksgiving they gave us Wednesday,Thursday,and Friday.thanksgiving was Thursday).
So he brought his earphones to listen to music just in case it boring.So while he was listening to music,while my cousin were play fighting as usually and he started to play while listening.so they called to pray and then they ate,while watching football.
so usually after all the kid (Rhadi,and his 2 cousins)make there Christmas list.So he was listening to my music trying not to let his cousins see because they will laugh at him because it’s old school.So he was listening making his list until his college cousin came from behind and took his phone and looked at what Rhadi was listening to.And of course he laughed and he said “what is that”and Rhadi said “old school”he laughed again.
So when he finished with my Christmas list he had old school albums.He was scared to give the Christmas list to his grandmother.And it didn’t make it better that she said it out loud.So when she passed it out no when came to talk to me.But when his brother and sister come it might be different.
But he said he hopes to get most of his gifts and merry Christmas.
I like how you wrote about yourself in 3rd person as well as including emotions like scared.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you included selected detail. Maybe next time try writing about something almost everybody experienced or knew about.
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