Slide Shock
Fifth grader Sage walked over to a cluster of people around the slide. She wondered what was happening. It was recess and she saw a lot of people jump back all at once and scream at the same time. Something was happening but she couldn't figure it out. Almost half of the grade was touching fingers. Than someone went down the slide and taped someone's hand and everyone jumped back. Sage thought it worked because of an electric shock but she was not sure.
Sage went over to some of her friends and got into the half circle. Sage watched someone go down the slide wondering what was going to happen. As they tapped the person's finger on the end Sage felt a shock at the exact same time.
“It didn't hurt the first time, but the second time it did. It hurt more the second time because the last person in line was touching metal which conducts electricity”, Sophie explained.
“It was fun to do and it is interesting how the science works” Says Madeline
“It was cool but it kind of hert” Says Claire. Sage agrees with Claire that it kind of hert.
“It was kind of scary because I just felt this immediate shock” Says Cha Cha.
The slide shock was surely a shock to many people. Many people liked it and thought it was very interesting. Lots of people also wonder what else will the fifth grade class of 2016-2017 discover, explore and, learn.
I liked how you added quotes with multipule points of view. Did you think about why people were doing the slide shock?
ReplyDelete