Pizza Party
By Claire
A wonderful smell drifted out of Mrs. Barnes 5th grade class. They had gotten a Pizza Party in Nov. because they got an TEAMWORK award. A TEAMWORK award is an award in which every time they get a compliment they put another letter until they spell TEAMWORK. Then they get a prize. In this case they chose an pizza party.
“It was okay.” says Siqi.
“I thought it was a lot of fun!” Liam.F says
It’s okay that some people don’t like it and some people do. They also watched a movie. There were cupcakes, oreos, and of course, pizza! They will start to work for their next TEAMWORK award. If you want to learn more about 5B’s party check out Cha Cha’s article!
I liked how you added many quotes. Maybe next time don't tell the reader to look at somebody else's work. They want to see yours!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you explained how we got the party. But, don't tell people to look at another person and what movie did they watch. But also, What was you favorite part?
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