So today is one of the days of the last few weeks of school,and the last full buddy meet ups.so were doing pictures.and we had to do0 a frame for both of us.so we started on my and i just put a whole bunch of dots it looked horrible.everybody was laughing including me because max was going to to have a better one.and max did exactly that.diamonds,dots,squares.everyone laughed.and me and max had a great picture and friendship.
I like how you explained that you weren't mad and was laughing too!
ReplyDeleteI like that you put detail on the different designs that you and max put.
ReplyDeleteTry to work on your editing remember after a sentence you have a uppercase letter and a space but other than that it sound so good and super detailed and you addressed the 5 W's and 1 H very well.
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