Thursday, March 30, 2017
100 Word Challenge by Rhadi
There was a beautiful brown skinned girl,that everyone knew that she could act but the thought she sucked and she thought it was hard.so when she had her first she show was scared.she was the lead actress and she didn't know why.but she went hard and people it.but then the camera guy got closer and closer,and guess what closer.and on the biggest line in the play she got worried and choked the line.but played it off,and the play was finished the play.she started to like acting.became the big actress
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A really nice narrative piece! Some great imagination. I really like the straight forward description, which gives the piece a personal feel. Good use of short and extended sentences, giving nice variation. Perhaps add some more descriptive vocabulary, and watch out for spacing. Keep up the good work!
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